CREATIVE WRITING: One evening last summer Jim and Debbie took a drive..

One evening last summer Jim and Debbie took a drive. It was dark as they drove down the street. “Turn the headlights on” said Jim. Their headlights shone down the road. Suddenly Debbie began to shout “Look! Help! This is the end of me!” “What is the matter with you?” said Jim. Debbie pointed to something. An alien spaceship! They jumped out of the car and ran to hide in the bushes but it was too late. WHIRRRR came the noise from the spaceship, louder and louder!
Suddenly a little cute alien came up and said “Hello. Greetings. Come to Timtomtwo in space.” The other one stared angrily at Debbie. “That’s Grumpy,” said the alien. “My name’s Happy.” “But we don’t want to come to Timtomtwo!” groaned Jim. Grumpy had got them up and took them onto the alien spaceship. Inside there were 100 controls all over the roof, the floor and the walls. “Oh,” said Happy, “Come in. Come here”. They walked over to where Happy was standing and stepped onto a piece of empty floor. Suddenly it began to move and stopped at the door. Grumpy pushed them through the door and it shut behind them. “Oh Sugar!” said Jim. There were no controls anywhere so the little room was empty – no nothing! One hour later they began to get hungry and suddenly Happy opened the door and smiled, “Good morning!” “Breakfast…” said Debbie weakly. “Yes, come into Timtomtwo”.
Debbie and Jim looked surprised but followed, amazed. When they were outside a rollercoaster zoomed past and bumper cars bumped around. It was noisy and a lot of shops sat on the side and funny creatures slithered around.
Jim saw the spaceship begin to lift off the ground. “Ha ha,” he said. “We’re not staying here forever!” They began to run over to the spaceship and jumped in the spaceship. They flew off to New Zealand and landed right in front of the car. They jumped in and drove home as fast as they could. When they got inside they stared at each other. “Phew. What a close save!”
By Josephine

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